Monday, August 16, 2010

the start of my exciting story if u see this please comment

AT THE AIRPORT

The windows were freezing with ice and Katy was shivering with excitement ready to go to the crowded airport for her long flight to Canada.
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4 comments:

  1. carissaAugust 16, 2010 at 7:53 PM

    please write a comment on if u like it or not PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!

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  2. alishaAugust 17, 2010 at 2:33 PM

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  3. alishaAugust 17, 2010 at 2:34 PM

    wow carissa u have done a good paragraph

    well done

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  4. JadeAugust 17, 2010 at 2:50 PM

    Your paraghraph doesn't really explain what she can see, or what is around here.

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